I liked how you commented that people always expect try-hards to succeed. I also like your numerous specific examples of your own experiences. Besides the last sentence of the first paragraph your grammer seems to be correct. The first paragraph is a little too long compared to the rest of the essay. I really liked the analysis on what the name callers are thinking.
I liked how you commented that people always expect try-hards to succeed. I also like your numerous specific examples of your own experiences. Besides the last sentence of the first paragraph your grammer seems to be correct. The first paragraph is a little too long compared to the rest of the essay. I really liked the analysis on what the name callers are thinking.
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